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THE AWAKENING

THE AWAKENING

Mike Brennan, at the age of twelve, witnessed the murder of Debbie Pemberton…he kept the secret of that dark and terrible day for fifty years. Now, after years of torment and nightmares, he goes back to investigate and expose the truth of that horrendous day.

Twists and turns, corruption and cover-ups make this an exciting and compelling read.

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ISBN: 1-9208-8479-3
Format:  Paperback
Number of pages: 107
Genre: Fiction/Thriller 

 

 

Author: Neil McInnes 
Imprint: Zeus
Publisher: Zeus Publications
Date Published: 2004
Language: English

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About the Author  

 

Neil McInnes lives on the New South Wales North Coast where he indulges in his three main loves…fishing, golf and writing. 

Neil has written a number of books for young adults but The Awakening is his first venture into the area of adult mystery stories.

Chapter One  

The late morning sun burst from a cloudless sky reflecting a blueness that almost blinded the senses. The boy and the bike seemed as one as it sped down the dusty, uneven track that snaked along the riverbank between paper bark and river gums. The bike was new, a Malvern Star, bright green and fast. A Christmas present earned for the many unpaid hours spent working in his father’s hardware store over the past 12 months.    

The boy was filled with melancholy. This was the last day of freedom before returning to school after the summer holidays. Freedom to enjoy life away from the nuns, his parents and all those who made life miserable for this adventurous and sometimes-mischievous 12-year-old. His two weeks of bliss, holidaying on Aunt Shirley’s farm, a short distance from the Murrumbidgee River, was about to end.    

The boy was heading towards his favourite swimming hole. This was his private place. During the floods of ’52 a large section of riverbank had collapsed at a bend in the river creating an artificial beach and billabong. The build-up of fallen trees and sand banks would ensure that what had been created would remain until the next big wet when the Murrumbidgee River would no doubt change its course once again.    

The boy sat up on the bike seat taking his hands off the handlebars, his open shirt billowed in the cooling breeze. He knew it was foolhardy to ride this way, on the uneven bush track but he didn’t care. He struggled to fight back the tears that formed patch marks on his tanned face. This was a holiday that he did not want to end. 

The thought of his secret swimming hole cheered him. The area was completely cut off from view from the opposite bank and access could only be gained along the bush track by bike or on foot. Because of the privacy he could go skinny-dipping and dry off laying naked on the beach, which was fun. This day, however, would be different. 

As he neared the water hole he suddenly realised people were swimming on the other side of the river. When he rounded the bend above the beach he could hear loud voices and laughter.  He dumped his bike behind some bushes and hurried to a large tree that had fallen across the track. From this vantage point he could see several people swimming and wading across the river further upstream.  There were two men and a girl. She was leading the others across the river. The girl was giggling and the boy guessed she had been drinking. The river was quite shallow at the bend and, while they all seemed good swimmers, the current still carried them down stream from where they had entered.   The boy watched in annoyance, as he could see where the current was taking them. Where they emerged from the river they would discover his secret swimming hole. 

The girl reached the sand bar that concealed the beach and water hole from view. She stood up and squealed with delight with what she saw.

“Look at this!” she yelled.  She was wearing only her underclothes. He grinned to himself, thinking what his mother would say.

“Disgusting little hussy, she will burn in hell for her sins.” 

Burning in hell seemed to be the common retribution his parents deemed necessary for serious misbehaviour, including his own. The girl plunged into the water hole, closely followed by her two male companions.  

The boy decided to stay until they left. As he watched the three frolic in the water he guessed they were not much older than his own teenage brother. He could see they were doing things that were rude and the girl seemed to be encouraging them.   

He knew plenty about sex from the kids at school and what he had managed to read on the subject at the local library. Not that his parents ever discussed the matter with him. For a 12-year-old boy anything sexual was a mortal sin and temptation was overcome by reciting the rosary, then repenting ones’ sins in the confessional on Saturday afternoon.  

The girl stood up, undid her bra and threw it up onto the beach. Her short blond hair was wet and it gave her a boyish look. Her body glistened in the hot sunlight. She raised her arms as if to show her companions her half-naked body then dived under the water. He had seen women’s breasts in medical and art books, and dirty pictures some older boys had shown him, but this was the first time in the flesh. The girl captivated the boy; she was beautiful.   

The boy watched spellbound by the events below him. He had a front row seat to the first real sexual event in his life. An experience that even his adventurous nature was finding a little overwhelming. His mates at school would be bowled over by this story. Then again, they probably wouldn’t believe him. At school, Mickey Brennan had a reputation as a storyteller and he had to admit he was sometimes guilty of exaggerating, and even fantasising about his real life adventures.  

Suddenly the girl broke from her two companions, climbed from the water hole and lay on the sand. He knew the exhilaration she was feeling with the sun on her semi naked body.  As her companions left the water, she jumped to her feet and ran towards the fallen tree where he was hiding.

“Gotta pee,” she called back to the others.

He froze. The fallen tree gave some protection but she was coming straight for his hiding place. She stepped up onto the tree trunk and looked around. She was no more than six feet away. She turned and looked down into the fork of the tree where he was lying. Her body was silhouetted in the noon day sun and he could not see her face. 

“Look what I’ve found,” she called back to the others.

He shut his eyes and waited.  When he opened them again she was gone. He heard her call back to her two companions who were heading in his direction. They scaled the fallen tree and looked down to where she was sitting on the grass.

“It’s more private down here,” she called out.

She was now completely naked. They had little interest in their surroundings, though they were close enough for the boy to hear their heavy breathing.  

“You can go first Benjy,” the young man nearest the boy babbled nervously.      

Even for a boy with his adventurous spirit, the experience was becoming too much and he was scared. He hid himself as far from sight as possible. He would wait it out until they left. While he had no wish to see the events that were unfolding he could still hear their voices.

There were only muffled sounds for what seemed an eternity then he heard the girl cry out, “I feel sick. I don’t want to any more, Jake.”  

“You’re nothing but a slut and a whore, Debbie Pemberton, and the whole town knows it,” the person called Jake shouted angrily.

The boy raised himself up on his elbow to see what was happening just to see the girl brandishing a tree branch and striking Jake across the back.

Jake fell to the ground, obviously in pain and shocked by the sudden violent response from the girl. Then Benjy laughed.  Jake sat stunned by his mate’s reaction to the incident, and the betrayal and insult of his laughter.  

“You bloody bitch!” he screamed as he staggered to his feet. He moved towards the defiant and still naked girl, his fists clenched and his face twisted in anger. The boy anticipated the eventual violent outcome that was about to occur. He turned his face away and covered his ears, but even then heard the smack as Jake struck the young girl in the face.   The punch knocked her off her feet and she fell backwards, striking her head on a tree stump.   

There was silence for a few moments as the two men stood and stared in horror at the girl lying motionless on the grass. Her head was propped up against the tree stump where she had fallen, her blond hair already streaked with blood.   

“You fuckin’ idiot, you killed her,” Benjy mumbled in a hushed voice. 

The two men began to argue. “Let’s get out of here!” Benjy called as he headed towards the fallen tree where the boy was curled up in terror. 

“We can’t leave her here like that,” Jake cried, still standing looking at the girl.

“Come on Jake,” Benjy called back angrily. “We’ve got to get back across the river.” 

He heard the two scramble over the fallen tree; then, from a distance one of them called to his mate something about a bike. The boy was terrified. They must have found his bike in the bushes. What happen next was a blur. His only thought was to get away from there. The place that had been a haven for him over the past two summer holidays was now a place of evil. 

The next thing the boy remembered was riding his bike back down the track he had travelled earlier. He had no idea of time. He was down over the handlebars like a racer, his lightweight bike bouncing perilously over the rough track. It had grown dark and a cold wind had sprung up. Had he been there all day?  Suddenly there was a flash of light and a noise so loud the boy thought his ears would burst. A crack of thunder and lightning had blasted across the rolling black clouds that filled the summer sky. A thunderstorm was moving in from the south.  

From the fallen tree, the track travelled for about two miles before it joined the road that crossed the river on an old wooden bridge. As he neared the junction he heard several cars crossing the bridge. People in cars meant safety. He would stop one and ask for help. 

In the darkening afternoon light the boy completely misjudged the junction and joined the road at exactly the same time as a large white car came off the bridge. There was a sickening thud as the front wheel of the bike struck the rear mudguard of the car a glancing blow.  

The boy sat stunned, but unhurt, on the ground. His bike was on the side of the road, the wheels spinning wildly, the front one badly buckled.  

The car came to a skidding halt, sending dust and stones in all directions. The boy struggled to his feet and was dusting himself down when the driver jumped from the car. As the dust settled around him the boy realised that it was one of the men from the river. It was Jake.

“Are you alright?” Jake called out. The boy did not respond; he was in shock.

“The bloody kid’s OK Jake, let’s go!” It was Benjy who had also alighted from the car.

A moment later the car drove off in a cloud of dust. 

There was a blinding flash of lightning, and, seconds later, a clap of thunder, so loud the ground shook beneath the young boy’s bare feet. He stood motionless, oblivious to the violent storm erupting around him. Large raindrops began thumping into the dusty river soil. The approaching squall sounded like a speeding train coming through the bush. The rain began falling in sheets, cooling the hot summer air, the smell of fresh rain on the parched bushland with its tinder dry undergrowth, was overpowering.  

The boy turned his face to the blackened sky, his eyes closed, as if urging the rain to wash away the memory of this terrible day. Two miles away in a grassy recess by a bend in the river, lay the battered body of a young girl; the same summer rain falling on eyes, open in death.      

 

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